I’m here with you even I tried to leave.
To a deeply breath I hide my feelings.
The sweetest care you shared;
Until we say goodbye.
The walk we find the road together.
You and I become comfortable and closer.
For you can lay your head over my shoulder;
Until we say goodbye.
I’m kindly trap inside your loving heart.
I can gently stay within this life.
And love with you forever;
Until we say goodbye.
“I dedicate this poem to a loving couple who have to say goodbye to life and not to love.” -dlysen
i love the poem, its short but really nice, when you read it the essence of the poem is simply but deep that you will feel … the words it self in each sentence is meaningful …
wow ganda ng poem n touch ako………….
nice work.. so deep
This is a great romantic poem, and I’m sure it will touch a lot of girls hearts…. I’m going to share it with my wife.
Keep up the great poems…
Cheers… Paulo
Nice poem.. It’s easier to appreciate poems that comes from the heart, and this poem is an example..i can feel it and for sure lot of people can relate to this too. Saying goodbye is the hardest thing for me, yet when learned and if it’s for the better of both sides, you’ll be thankful you have loved..
Some poem I created was expressed from the emotion I borrowed from the past and personal experienced.
woooo…..nice piece dude…keep it up!!
Nice poem!
Thanks for dropping by my page.
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good job.. short but full of emotions.. it can move hearts…
short poem but meaningful…